I just started writing a new story. Chapter one is already in the queue waiting to be valiadated but I am unhappy with the summary and could use some help.
In general the story is about how Hermione is saved from drowning by her guardian angel. After deciding to take her second chance on life, her Angel comes back with her to help fulfill her heart's every desire. However then Angel starts making strange and sinister requests and Hermione must question who he truly is and where he actually came from.
Any suggestions would be helpful.
Pure, innocent people can be the most deceptive. Little did Hermione know that perfection can be scarred, changing her life into hell.
Not all angels are good. This one ruined my life.
I hope I could help!